I think I made it through five minutes. He could have condensed that 5 minutes into two sentences:
1) I bought a Traxxas 4x4 Slash and, while good at first, gave me nothing but quality issues.
2) I bought an Aarma Kraton and it's been rock-solid since purchase.
Obviously, he slept through the part of English class where they teach how to construct a thesis. That's kind of important if you want people to listen to what you have to say. Make your point in your first couple of sentences and then spend the rest of the time backing your statement up.
I hammer this into my kids' heads all the time when they pull the "it's only the internet..." card. I explain to them that you are how you present yourself, and if you present yourself as an illiterate, expect to be treated as such.
Sorry for the rant. Things like this drive me nuts when I'm trying find info on the net. So many just ramble on and on and on... Get to the point, ffs! :roll:
Also, I really wanted to slap that flat brim off his head...